All Comments on 'Kyle's Mother-in-law Comes to Stay Ch. 02'

This has so much potential. Just don’t go for any of that pregnancy nonsense.

Chapter 3 needs to reveal that Alice has known all along and set her mother up for the fuck in the first place. Maybe even join Rose and her husband.

5 *'s

While reading towards the end my thumb hit one star! I really enjoyed the story and it’s deserving of 5 stars!

He needs to fuck wife her mother and her aunt

The boarding school comment makes it seem like the sister is older by a few years.

The stories are decent but not great stroke stories and not quite detailed enough to be more. Overall you're doing good and have kept it free flowing and therein lies the problem The Anne visits are clearly bullshit, so what is she doing. I agree with other comments that Alice likely is on it or aware of what's going on. I don't like how he shows virtually no remorse or any thoughts of what happens when the train crashes. Clearly, revealing he's screwed all her female relatives without her tacit knowledge/approval would be devastating. Were the aunts arguing with each other when he walked up actually talking about what really was going on with Alice's visits to Anne (and nights out)? They've been married for a while, what's the plan on a family? Expand your creative writing talents as you go forward! 4* for now

Looking forward to the. continuation

I liked it. I always like your stories.

I would like for this one to continue.

I hope that this wasn't the end to this one.

I like the theme and the characters. I also think your trying to get far too much into each page. I also like a lot more detail and descriptions of all the sex scenes. While a very good breakdown of what took place, it should have been a 6 or 7 page read instead of a 3. Please continue but with more detail.

It feels like their was a plan in the beginning to have Alice in the known about his thing with his MIL and possibly having the MC permanently satisfy his MIL and his wife. But later on it just turned into the MC throwing his wife away for no reason.

Would love to see more.

I love the fact that he's cheating with women related to his wife. Nothing hotter than cheating and betrayal. Looking forward to his affair with her sister-in-law. I'm also curious if he would be able to fuck Anne too. That would be HOT!

Please, Please be encouraged. This has the beginnings of a great series. I have no critiques this is all great, brilliant in fact. There are so many ways that this can go. How does Anna fit in this story? I have a theory? Is Alicen really that clueless? Will Kyle have a harem in the end? Regardless of what happens next; I‘m rooting for a happily ever after for Kyle and Rose. IMO, they are meant for each other. Please be very encouraged to continue this series, and please don’t make us wait very much longer. I’m a fan of great erotic love stories. I have several of these extended narratives on my favorites list. 5+ stars. (11/22/2021)

Love the story. Next chapter , please. AAAAAA+++++

Fun little series.

10/10!!!!!

I AGREE, THERE MUST BE MORE CHAPTERS! There is Vicky, Anne, Lily comes back, but there is still the question 'Is Alice getting fucked every Wednesday night?' Then there is all those trips to the store for two hours or more, and she comes home with two bags? Then she comes home and bang him every time. Is that to cover up in case she gets pregnant from her boyfriend? I think chris99999 has some explaining to do, and 3 or 4 chapters would probably clear up. Great so far. Keep writing.

XYZ

You more than deserve many more stars for the whole story. Again I say BRAVO. I do have questions, which Kyle did voice about Alice. For me, maybe it would have been good for him to find out, because all of Alice's nights out became suspicious, including going out with friends because they seemed to be so well planned, especially with Anne. Were there conversations with Alice and her mother about Kyle, especially home alone with her mother while Alice went out. She took her mother with her once to see Anne, but was that to cover for something else on all the other visits. Alice began to do sex acts she never did before with Kyle, like those of her mother, and she was so horny after being with Anne, and could she be bisexual. Just to many unanswered, so another chapter would be good. JEF

The initial premise was a good one, but then went over the top, the circle became far to large and well beyond the bounds of credibility. If you intend to write fantasy do not try to wrap it up as reality.

From what I read she is getting fucked and not by him and not just by a guy but since story is about him fucking around on her we will never know.

I gotta ask. What's up with these one and done women? It's been my experience that women will come several times if not more. Sometimes a lot more. And Alice is acting very suspicious. Almost, dare I say it, fucking around with Anne.

It wasn't bad but the husband is a pussy and his wife was mostly definitely cheating on him and it started before he fucked his mother in law shes probably doing to the other man that she won't do for her husband he's a pussy cause the wife runs all over him keep inviting people to stay with them without even asking her husbands opinion basically saying it is going to happen rather you like it or not