All Comments on 'KYNK Ch. 01'

Why did the story repeat on pages 3-5?

i loved it....lots suspense and very sexy.. plse write more.

I think the repeated pages were a tease and denial. More pages....no! Where are the more pages? A couple requests. Don't overdo the rich guy part. He can be wealthy without be ridiculous about it. Don't make the boss/Dom an asshole who smirks all the time. Jeeze, I hate smirky assholes. Being a smirky asshole doesn't make a person dominant, just...a smirky asshole. Off to fix a big bowl of popcorn for the next chapter.

Apologies! It was a mix up with the document titles, but I did re-submit the proper document. I'm just waiting for it to be updated.

That said, thank you for all of the remarks!

I also just want to mention, though, that there will be a sort of slow development for Elliott over time. He comes off as a snarky bastard now for sure, but books and covers, eh? (;

I really enjoyed what you've written so far.