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"She's dead," said Jade. Maggi gave a cruel smile.
"I don't care," she replied, her voice full of hate and menace. "She still owes me."
The gunshot sounded loud in the small office as Maggi pulled the trigger.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoi could't agree more with rikki b comments more . thank you so very much for your stories you post here. i so very much wish you all the best for your future endeavours. as i am trans your work means so much.xoxo ( ps i can't wait for more !! ).
Louise69over 6 years agoAuthorThanks Rikki B- it was hard to kill some characters but I wanted the last 2 chapters to have weight and real stakes for the reader. Besides, I left a clue in the opening about how many died that night...
Thank you also for your continued support and kind comments.
Hugs
Louise xx
Anonymousover 6 years agoI have to say though that this cut me to the core. I have come to love these characters and to see them so cruelly murdered is not sitting well right now. I can't wait to see how this story ends(sigh :-/ ). It has been a great treat to read and I will be longing for more for quite some time. I hope that you can find the time and inspiration to start something else dealing with Trans Girls. Your insight into the psyche of people born in the wrong body is nothing short of uncanny and the care with which you deal with this subject matter is to be commended! The sexy bits are OK too ;-).. Thank you for all your effort in posting FREE stories. Wish you all the luck in the world with your future works even if you never post another story here.
Most Sincerely,
Rikki B
