by eventidusculo
A little rough, not too rough. I doubt you will have a second part, but we can hope. Some details about the piercings and brand, perhaps?
He branded her?! So he has no intention of ever releasing her? What makes a tatoo lusty? Were those and all the piercings punishments? He’s not going to get bored and kill her, right? Was his cat a real cat or a human? He seems awfully equipped with pet accessories for a spur of the moment decision to make her his pet. Guess he could just have a long-standing petplay kink so he has tails, ears and human-sized cages lying about the house.
Whenever you can bring yourself back to this, would you write one or two subsequent parts about how he treats and rewards her once she’s trained, and if their relationship ever becomes more than this. He keeps her sexually only for himself although he likes showing her off, yes? He doesn’t seem like the sharing type. Does she ever get away to live a full, regular life? What did that take? Did he release her after they found the ex-boyfriend thinking she was so trained that she’d never walk away? That would be nice: he smugly releases her and then watches her actually walk away from him naked with her ears and tail on because leaving naked is better than letting him treat her as a thing forever or until he kills her.