by Maggie Red Rose
So let me get this.... A beautiful mother willingly had sex with an ugly heavy dyke loving it all the way... Hmmm... At least make it half true, make the young woman resist a little... Fantasies are good when there is a part that can actually happen... Sorry not good work...
Sorry, have to agree, even fantasies have to have a hint of reality to make them sexy...
Unreal is the only word for this story. So unreal I gave it a zero. You need to read and learn from the totally believable lesbian stories by the late Colleen Thomas, probably the best writer to ever submit stories to Literotica.
Don't pay attention to the negative comments. It's a cool fantasy, and doesn't have to be believable.
And please make a comeback!