by susietreasure
This involves violence and pain and should be in the BDSM category not lesbian sex.
Of course you realize that, while the characters are female, the action of this piece has transitioned from lesbian sex with BDSM overtones to a BDSM story with lesbian overtones. Anyway, the thing you do very well is relate how Suzie's inner world transforms and you give the reader a good view of her amazement at what both repels and attracts her. I'm not really into serious BDSM, so I'm reluctant to read Ch. 03, but your writing is so good that I can't not. Mmmm, thanks.