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by clarissaj1982

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hotwords229hotwords229almost 7 years ago
Good work

I love the idea that you're writing as a guy. I have tried writing from a female perspective and it isn't easy. My only criticism is the term meat curtains, not a lot of guys are going to use that term, in my opinion. At least not outside an 8th grade locker room. Otherwise keep it up you're doing great!

Thanks for the story and the affect it had on me.

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