All Comments on 'Lacy Finally Loosens UP'
by jealouscuck
- 28 Comments
Anonymousabout 7 years agoBlack ones, too. How original. Just stop this shit. None of this shit is ever enjoyed. Why do these dumb ass writers keep posting it?
sbrooks103xabout 7 years agoSex outside of marriage is fun? How much fun is it for her husband? How much fun will it be when HE gets some sex outside of marriage?
Anonymousabout 7 years agoA few stories back you told readers if they did not like the story or the theme then maybe they should not read the story but yet you come and tell us how bad other stories are that you do not like..Go Figure..
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThis story reads as if it was written by a 12 year old boy, and also a gay boy based on the amount of time you spent describing the 3 cocks.
I did however like the image of Lacy with the 36DD's jogging on the treadmill.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoVery poorly written. Way too much extraneous garbage. Why did you feel the need to go over her upbringing twice? The delivery of this story was wooden and you never made me believe for a second that she would do anything with the BBC's. This was an example of horrible story telling.
No stars.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoYes it did ruin the marriage.
Yes Jeff and her parents found out.
No she no longer fooled Jeff
No she could not go home and live with her parents.
Yes she now lives in a Brothel
Yes she is no longer a nice girl.
No she got only what she deserved in the divorce
Yes Jeff is very happy with his new wife and family
and finally Yes he includes his former in-laws in family events
That ought to answer all your questions.
TBGB
shaman43about 7 years agoMan talk about the use of clichés and stereotypes. Small white cocks. Tired attorney husband. Sheltered southern white woman. Aggressive, big cocked black men. (Rather racist too) Big cock means great, climax inducing sex. Save us from sophomoric writing.
Anonymousabout 7 years agofrom a fetish writer, what did you guys think it would be? hemingway?
Anonymousabout 7 years agoShe is going to be known as the work bike...easy n sleazy. Oh but she still loves the hubby...bullshit. for better or worse goes out the window. Drugs can male you feel good too. Does that mean you should do them. There is no justification other than its a big cock. Not much but the sleazy interracial. Average Joe's do actually lead happy sex lives.... but not so much in the loving wives catagory....not all black guys are bills either. Must be another case of alt reality. You add a shower washes away the guilt...lol. Whhhhhat?
Anonymousabout 7 years agoshe should get a divorce. One, she will NOT forget the joy. If she stays married to this husband in 40 years of marriage her life will be empty and sad style of life. As old as I am have seen a many of married relationship struggle for years and no one is happy.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoLacy just ended her marriage she just doesn't know it yet but her slutty ways will catch up to her either through disease, pregnancy or discovery by her husband. Of course she really doesn't want a relationship with her husband only a paid home and financial support while she gets to play with her other guys.
sbrooks103xalmost 7 years agoWhere did I say "how bad the story was?"
I simply asked how much fun she thought it would be if her HUSBAND got some sex outside of marriage.
sbrooks103xalmost 7 years ago"she could not be satisfied any longer with his quickie fucks and his little cock." - So get a divorce!
sbrooks103xalmost 7 years agoAverage penis size is about 5", so how is Jeff's cock "little" if it's average size?
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoAlways the same shit, sluts cuckolds and pathetic authors!!!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI gave it a 4.2 (B+). I sense that this story will eventually reach a 4.2 score if not more.
jealouscuck did not strike the right balance between explanation of Lacy's character & concrete events that triggered the changes in her attitude towards sexuality.
In my mind the intro could have been cut in half & changes in her innermost world could have been depicted in more detail.
The scene where Lacy sees a tall black man's cock for the first time in her life was outright PRICELESS. That event sends shock waves thoughout her body & mind; in the ensuing seismic shift, her own WILD SIDE gets released. Lacy was not aware of her other side because it was hermetically sealed in the subconscious portion of her psyche.
Above explains Lacy's non-gradual transformation from a one-man's woman to a hot wife who sucks 3 black cocks as a warm-up for the main course.
Anonymousover 6 years agoThat total fucktard who lost these negative comments on Loving Wife stories apparently is way to stupid to actually read Literotica’s description of what types of stories go in this section. “Extra-marital sex including wife sharing, swinging and more”
Anonymousover 6 years agoWhat waste of time reading all this garbage.
This story is so nonsense, pathetic, poor written, low context, wimp and pure lame.
Perhaps the writer would have better chance to publish this garbage in the T&C and/or Gay session rather than LW session. The LW readers usually do not appreciate gay guys pretending they are wimp husbands looking for big cocks to clean the loads of cum out of their STD cunt wives.
1* for this shit.
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