by Finchley
I liked it. It was a little to brief for my taste and not really a lesbian tale, however the potential is there and since you indicated chapter one in your title, I assume more is to follow. Still, your development is excellent and your writing style interesting. Good work and I hope to read more.
I really like your take on historical sex therapy with a view of how it must have been for the patient. I love your work, please write more,
I love history and have read about Hysteria therapy, to read it with an erotic edge made it very special, thanks for your wonderful work.