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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It started out pretty jumbled up with too many character references with nothing going on.

After the third chapter I was ready to stop reading the story, but I pushed on to chapter four where the action started. Glad I did. Chapters five and six were kick ass.

I would recommend add some amount of action in the beginning to make the story have a little more Literotica.

A fun read!

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Long-time writer of computer software, technical documents, papers and more boring stuff. Long-time pretend writer of fiction, erotic and other, but never put these latter 'out there.' It's time. Many of my stories take place in what I call "Mel's Universe," after the female l...