All Comments on 'Lady Ravensdale and the Highwayman: Alternative Ending'

Okay, I had a minor complaint about ending #1 but this doesn't really improve it for me. I think it would have been better to end it with her getting her 'inheritance', perhaps with a lasivious letter and, at most, some indication that she was looking forward to future debaucheries now that she had learned what sexual pleasure was all about.

Also, I know typos are inevitable but I found the mis-typing of the word 'lava' as 'larva' was a funny slip that broke the mood. I assume you are a Brit who typically pronounces an 'r' in front of an 'a'.

Still, overall, an excellent story.

ending was ok...but i think i liked the original better...but thanks anyways for a alternate/choice*smile*..keep on writing you have a excellent ability here. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

The lady's life was what I would say very erotic topped by the ending of her continuing her erotic romping with a good anal fucking.