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Click here"William, the man you told your friends to throw in my river, didn't want me to come here tonight. He is a good man. I hope he will forgive me." The raven haired woman smiled dreamily and it seemed like the steadily freezing Robbie wasn't there with her for a few moments. Finally, she snapped her intense blue eyes back upon him. "I have decided that I will love William very much. Yet love isn't in my nature and I fear I once lost much because I wasn't true to who I am. I think I must find a balance and I cannot forgive or forget what you did to him."
Robbie was now desperately trying to strain his muscle but his body wouldn't move. His heart had begun to slow and he felt his lungs beginning to freeze in his chest.
"But alas, I must leave you. I have to see your two friends before the night is out and then my love awaits me. We're going dancing. I like dancing very much." Her eyes took on a dreamy gleam as she gave Robbie a malicious smile and planted a small kiss upon his brow that began the process of spreading her ice over his mind. "But I fear I am still Winter...and Winter can be cruel."
With a parting pat in amidst the crisp strands of his frozen hair, Lady Winter walked passed the one responsible for William's murder and flicked off the light before leaving through the open doorway. The last thing Robbie knew was the darkness.
The darkness and the winter cold.
I thought this was a truly excellent tale. If one can imagine the ancient Norsemen composing their poetic Edä on the frozen tundra looking at the cool and desolate beauty of the harsh and frigid land they called home. Imagine them in their longships and in their armies and before their fires singing of battle and of the frost giants and of Odin. For 'they come from the land of the ice and snow with the midnight sun and the hot springs blow.'
These are the peoples that would truly understand the allure of the Lady of Winter.
Great stuff man.
Really “Slay bells”? Sleigh bells. I just started the story and I am disappointed.
I must agree with one of the anonymous comments... your writing should NOT be abandoned. Though it's been years, I can only hope that Winter shall return, unfinished tales are concluded and your writings continue. Until then, I'll leave you in my favs to await the day I see your name come up again.
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Brilliant. Sharp and sparkly. A surprise package on the coldest day so far this year. Winter has cum. Wonderful
Great story. Liked the way Lady Winter stayed true to her name at the.
A very different story to "The Missing Dragon." Both are excellent. I appreciate how the author can switch genres and still be effective.
I urge and entreat the author to resume writing. Such talent should not be abandoned
OH MY, What a wonderful and delightful and different story that you conjured up. I loved it. Thanks so much for the story. This is the first story of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading and now I look forward towards reading many more of your writings.
Good story, but you would benefit from having someone copyedit your work. There are some problems with homophones— “slay” for sleigh, “reigned” for reined, etc., and a few minor typos.
There was also a more troublesome continuity error. When they first have actual intercourse, we’re told that William entered Lady Winter, “and she snugly accommodated all he had to give”. Just a couple of sentences later, he’s pulled out and is pushing back in when he encounters her hymen. She then pulls him further into her in order to pierce it. It left one to wonder how, when she’d accommodated his entire length on the first stroke, he could have been blocked by her hymen on the second stroke...
Oh, well. It was still a very good story, and I particularly liked how Lady Winter remained true to her nature at the very end.
And what a pleasure it was...will continue to see what else Lien has in store for us here on SOL.
now this is a great story.i wish there were more like it on this site
I genuinely still love this story, despite it having been seven years since I first read it. I like best that you kept winter true to its nature, beautiful and powerful, but equally dangerous.
Christ that sounds cheesy but still! I stand by it!
There aren't enough words to say how wonderful this is. Taking a curl side of Lady Winter and making her smile due to one man. That is what makes a good writer. Twisting it into your own master peace. Thank you for sharing.