All Comments on 'Lady's Tithes: Lars'

You describe the main male character as a boy and a child[ren]. It was not until halfway through the story that you described him as being 18 years old. I suggest that next story you maybe outline the ages earlier in the plot and use the term youth or young man instead of boy to avoid any hint of underage activity. :-)

will do chief

Come on over to 8monster mate you're a good writer

It was cute and sweet.

A lot of your stories don’t have another chapter when they are so deserving of one. Don’t let this be one of them.

Oh believe me, I WILL make more. But I have a job, a family to keep, and a lot of things. Trust me. All will have some more chapters!

Cute 'n' Sweet!

11/10 Red Onis!!!!!

Your story is just a porn story were the males are sex slaves because that's all the story is about,you should have made it believable it's a rather boring story I guess you think sex what makes a good story I think a good plot is needed I mean who wants to read about a coward because all the males are always cowardly in stories like this one a very dull story

@Tomdully

Your opinion might carry more weight if you knew how to use a fucking comma, dude.