All Comments on 'Lake Cabin Ch. 02'

by mnshyguy

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NamizujsNamizujsover 18 years ago
Great! And the twist in the tail!

Thanks for a story well told, and a happy end to boot!

Do some more please!

John

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Lovely....

.... just like the last one

Always, E

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Actually, it depends on the state

There are several states that permit first cousins to marry. Anything beyond that (e.g., second cousins or first cousin once removed) is legal in all states.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sequels?

Great second chapter. Nice twist at the end. Hope you have a third chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent story

Well done and keep up ch. 03 thanks cfh

BolivianSoldierBolivianSoldierover 18 years ago
boo for the ending

Nice, sweet story. I enjoyed it and thanks for sharing it with me. But I have to boo the ending. The story was to good to sell out at the end like it did.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great

Great,

Hope there is a sequel

KEEP THEM COMING!

no pun intended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved it!

Keep the stories coming for several more chapters. These were very good hope you can work some nice twists in the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
more

can you pls continue with this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great

Simply one of the best stories on here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Not too bad at all

I agree with one person though, the ending was sort of a sell out. I did like it, your writing is very good. Please continue the saga.. Chapter 3????

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
F#cken Right Man

This story is one of the best I have read on here. It was funny seirous and hard to stop reading. I agree with the other you should deffintly keep this story up or write more like it.. The ending was very well done to telling julie that she can be with her true love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent.

Simply one of the best. It mixed sentiment and outright lust perfectly. To be completely honest, it was a great love story, not too mushy, but just enough to keep you interested. Definantly a favorite.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved it but...

Hi loved your story soooo much... didn't like the last chapter that much though (chapter 3)... not much into sharing thing I suppose lol keep posting :)

Andie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
last paragraph

very cool

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
so Julie is the daughter of her cousin?

too many twists and turns

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Makes you proud to be in St. Cloud or Moorhead I s’pose. Really. 1st chapter was a solid 3 & change. This chapter came up shorter than Billy Barty trying to dunk with a three step charge

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