All Comments on 'Lake Timberland Ch. 05'

Things finally heat up enough to where Mom and son go all the way ❤️

Five big stars here ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Not crazy about the pissing part but loving everything else! Five stars and a favorite point!

The story lost the steam it started with for me it went downhill

Need to escalate things with the sister or you will start losing steam on this series. For right now 5 stars.

This chapter was incredibly hot. I want to see the father and daughter getting involved, or at a minimum, bring her into a 3some . 5 stars

Still cannot wait for day five!! I hope it comes soon! :)

Incredible story! Can’t wait for next chapter…

Amazing story so far. Time to let Molly join them. Mom/Son/Daughter sex is so erotic.

Not much of an edit or rewrite. It's basically the same as before

The peeing is not hot or sexy in any way. Other than that and a few grammatical issues, good story.

Couple incomplete sentences and spelling errors in there. Don't tarnish a great story like that lol

I have to say this I look forward to when these post. I hope they continue through the week and wonder how it will continue once they return home. Keep them cumming!

Pun intended or not lol

5 Stars

Well I meant to get out of bed this morning but I had to read all 5 chapters 10/10

Good so far, waiting for the sister to get involved with her brother and mother ... seems like it's headed there, and A little ass play as well ... must say intrigued at the directions this could go ... awaiting the next part with anticipation 😁👍

Yeah, the pissing part ain't my bag. But still another fun chapter. BUT... rut row, isn't Dad going to be taking him fishing early in the morning. Hmmmm both asleep, naked in the same sleeping bag. I can't imagine that would cause any issues being found that way in a few hours :)

Can’t wait for bro sis action. Please no Dad involvement.

He needs to have a threesome with his mom and sister soon.

Absolutely love the part on the deck! So naughty lol. What a fun series to read! So glad I clicked on it

loved that we started to tease Molly getting involved. would love to see her and her friend seduce Rodger so he doesn't get left out. he doesn't seem like a bad guy, just lost his spark.

I liked the build up. Not to worried if no sister. I

Iove it is between Mom and Son.

Another very hot chapter! I love this story line.

So far enjoying the build up but Molly needs to start seducing dad and bringing him into the fold. Molly also needs to join her mom and mom.

I would like the father to be involved in some way in the family fun. I think your sister wants it

You're going to be writing another 5 chapters to cover all the possibilities in this story. I can't wait!!

I love and appreciate all the wonderful feedback. Thank you, everyone. 😃

I don't want to give away the rest of the story, but I can promise you Molly isn't going anywhere!

Please remain patient with me as I take my time revising and writing to last few chapters of the story. It may be a few weeks.

Please don’t bring the father in, let Molly join Mom and son.

Sorry...don't want the father involved at all.

i'm hooked! can't wait for more

Take as much time as you need. It's one of the best build-up story I've ever read here and the pacing is very well thought too. I do agree with others about father role though. Even if you hinted at it, I would very much like the father to not get involve in the fun trio.

The 'sneaky' element in the story make it even more spicy, for example one of the best scene in the story was when Molly was looking for father while she watch the mother give bj to her brother.

But involving everyone would just make the entire experience less exciting.

Looking forward to the updates. Good luck!

I like this one, but I hope dad and Molly get involved too. Take your time!

Please include pissing part more like piss drinking. danny drink mother piss...it will be superb story then.See incest story for fun and include more kink fetish like piss drinking..

Can you write a story about mom and son or brother and sister being forced to fuck? They are humiliated and really reluctant but they cum none the less...

Maybe all is happening in public, mmmm that would make me so wet

Can’t wait to finish this story!

I am waiting for the next instalment(s).

Great story!

Incredible story! Waiting for the next chapter

Agree, be great to read a story about a family being humiliated and forced to fuck each other reluctantly but slowly giving in to the pleasure. The more prudish they are the better.

Digging the story, kinda left me wanting more interaction with Molly. Either her Molly and her brother have their own time together or a threesome with brother sister and mother. Hopefully it'll come in the next part or the next. But I definitely think one or the other is going to happen... maybe both? Anyways, it's a good read. Five stars!

Come on writer boy, chop chop with part 6. And please get them in a threesome

Damn the was hot, my cock is dripping, I was hoping molly might of got a bit as well, even maybe with dad in the boat.

Sure hope you get the next chapter posted soon! I can't wait for him to cum in his sister's pussy!

Damn fine read... probably the best on here!

Fun story, all chapters! Love how the three are sneaky and open with each other. Keep dad out of it! Bring on part 6 to 10 :)

Thanks everyone for remaining patient while I take an extensive, mental break from writing. I'll finish this series eventually, I promise! If you have any questions, concerns, or ideas for me, feel free reach out via email. Thanks again!

Sorry @youdareme, I'm calling bullshit. I've also reported you to the webmaster. You commented well over 3 weeks ago that you'd have the final chapters in a few weeks. Seems like you just don't care or you're just stringing readers along either way go fuck yourself.

The webmaster? Lol.

What exactly is there to report, that I'm not publishing fast enough for you? Let's keep in mind that this is a free site, where the writers don't owe the readers anything. I'll take as long as I need. Thanks! 😊

Love the story so far. I think it would be nice to find out that Molly is already fucking dad, without anyone else knowing or for dad to catch his wife fucking his son Danny, and double team her or if Molly tells dad and they both join mom and Danny in bed!

There are so many avenues for you to go with this one.

Waiting patiently,

Tom

Great exciting story. Would be nice that they continue their truth or dare. The mother would dare Molly to suck her brother’s cock, then another dare for Molly to do 69 with her brother then eventually the most exciting dare for Molly and her brother to have intercourse right in front of their mother.

Would be nice if the father will be included at the end and the final dares will be a DP.

Sorry to hear, I really enjoyed your story. I hope this will finish some day. Get well soon.

@YouDareMe, please ignore the idiots on here who post needlessly negative comments. This is one of the best series on the site, so take the time you need. I was a huge fan of the original version you posted, and the modifications you've made have helped to make the story even better.

Hottest incest story ever! So very well written, cannot wait to read about him ass fucking mommy AND sis.

Great story! .... hoping you can finish the last few chapters. But don't rush. Take your time and take care of yourself.

Well I keep checking for an update…. You have me hooked wanting so much more. As I am not going to suggest a direction for YOUR story. I love the thought of reading, waiting, for you to throw the curve ball to send all of us over the edge.

Ooof.. that was so hot. Thank you for writing this series. It was amazing and I had so much fun reading it

Eagerly waiting for next parts/works

Cheers

Chapter 6 has been submitted 😊

It is currently pending approval, and will hopefully be available to read by Tuesday morning 🤞

It's a shorter chapter, but bear with me, there will be much more fun to come!

This is so fucking hot! I the pee adds a nice kinky element.