All Comments on 'Lake Twonsa'

A mistake? OK story; would be better if he fucked her. Stories with only oral sex tend to be boring.

Ref. the earlier comment: They sure are. At least she could have climbed onto his waist and rode him... Damn!!!

I absolutely adored this story. It was sexy, fun, and endearing.

Don't listen to detractors - if every story included every sex act it would be awfully boring. This story is perfect exactly as it is :)

it was good, need more with him naked and she fully clothed. can't wait to next chapter. maybe she will be play with his butt more next time

Welcome to the Lit club. Very well written. Sexy. I like a little more emphasis on the cfnm but that's just me.

I like him being naked in front of her. Perhaps, you can increase the erotic tension next time by her bringing a camera. As you wrote he felt a bit self-conscious because of cameras in the sports complex. How would he feel standing naked at the see being photographed by this beautiful fully clothed women? I think some erotic meanness of the female increases the erotic strain. Taking pics of his nude body and teasing him must humiliate him. I also hope that she shows the pics to other women in his presence and against his will. That could get really arousing.

Great start to what could be a series of adventures! Next time todd sees her, she is in the

lake and when she sees him , and walks towards him on shore, her white bikini gives him

a sweet view of her gorgeous body like the suit didn't exist. Thank You for a sweet story!