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Anonymousover 12 years agoI really don't understand the strange US habit of using 'would'
when it's a simple past tense.
And the word is 'stuttered', not 'studdered'.
Anonymousover 12 years agogood story, why do petty people think they are proof readers ? Who cares what people like that think
Scotsman69over 12 years agoLots of people care for the correct use of language, including me.
It's simple. It ensures that the writer's intent is unambiguous. I'm with anonymous on this.
digdaddyrichover 12 years agoWas this planned by the husband or the wife?
I couldn't tell who the conspirators were. It seems as if someone set up this fantasy roll playing, but I'm not sure who was the instigator.
Perhaps a second chapter will explain.
Roammeover 7 years agoLOVED IT!
I would LOVE it if my husband set that up on me. I wouldn't want to know about it being set up until after the other man was gone though.
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