All Comments on 'Lakeside View Pt. 03'

Why do you bring these stories from other categories to Loving Wives. They never do well.

Have to assume author is looking readership affirmation. He/she won't find it here.

It's always a mistake to jump around between categories. You multiply that mistake by jumping into the contentious loving wives category. Since the story is poorly written, at the level of an 8th grader and the characters are thoroughly unlikable people, you have no chance that this was going to be even mildly entertaining.

1 star

i completely disagree with the comments below. first - really - who cares about category? This is a fun, well written sexy story. I gave it 5 stars, and i'm looking forward to reading more. But i do think that when writers publish a multi part story they should think about the best category for the overall story and put it there. it's easier to follow. And just caveat up front what may be in the text. But theis is a very hot, sexy story. ENCORE!

In your writing style and story telling, not nearly as good as the 1st two.

Casey... all of your stories are wonderful; both in the writing conventions and in the tales themselves. If I were an author which I’m not, I would wish that I could write stories exactly like yours. For me, they push 100% of my sexy buttons, and you give your characters such wonderful, playful, exploring, and supportive, loving relationships. Your negative critics don’t understand what good writing is— a lot of hard work and a lot of re-writing. And they also have obviously never been in the lifestyle. My wife and I are a member of a club where every bit of sexuality goes on by the pools and out in the open. Lots of bi, lots of swinging. And a hell of a lot of fun.

So, all that’s to say, exceptionally well crafted stories. Thank you!

Delightfully erotic! I am wishing I could be in a scene like that right now!