All Comments on 'Lamia Ch. 06'

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ender2k2kender2k2kover 1 year ago

Wow. That was an awesome direction for the story to take. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks

FelHarperFelHarperover 1 year agoAuthor

@muskyboy Nah, I’m not a fan of downer endings. Chapter 7 is on the way.

Roxis92Roxis92over 1 year ago

If she caught you with the AI Christine, then that means Christine knew and didn’t tell you just to rub it in her face and I find it hilarious.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow, just wow. Five stars.

FelHarperFelHarperover 1 year agoAuthor

Chapter 7 has been submitted. I would expect to see it published early/middle of the week.

IndrasIndrasover 1 year ago

I have to say, I thought I had guessed the truth about Lamia, but I was wrong. I'm glad I was, this is turning out to be far more interesting!

Regardless of Patricia's major change of heart, it is going to take a tremendous amount of work for Stephen to trust her again, if he ever does. She cheated on him in almost every way already, putting her career and her would-be boyfriend above her marriage for months. Not to mention the birth control, which was a real slap in the face. Who knows if that relationship can be repaired...

Next chapter should be interesting!

bhojobhojoover 1 year ago

Wow what a reveal. What a conception. What a mindblowing concept. This is a first class tale

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Didn’t like how he cut off his wife and didn't take time to come to terms with the Craig revelation and proceeded to immerse himself in Christine… it doesn’t ring true of his character that he would just carry on working and playing for days after that reveal. But it’s a great story. His Inadvertent reveal shouting out about Lamia made me shout “No!” In real life. It was pretty unbelievable that he’d make a mistake that dumb. His character is more passive .. had he whispered it under his breath while walking out the store

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12/12 Update: Double Helix 24 is moving along. It’s one of those chapters where I’ve had to rewrite several times for everything to make sense. Sometimes the plot flows like a river. This is one of those times where it hacks and slashes like a gory horror flick. I’ll get there...

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