All Comments on 'Languid Lovers'

It got me very hot. if you suck and fuck as well as you write... Wow!

Very hot story, very descriptive and vivid! I wish he had pulled out and then shoved his cock back into your mouth and filled your mouth with his cum. There is always next time!

It's great to know that there are some ladies who appreciate the texture of a generous splurting of cum, and who enjoy rubbing it on their bodies, even licking the love syrup from their fingers.

female first person is hot. Reading you describe the moments and actions was vivid and well appreciated. Keep up the fun work :)

A real hot little story, you said more on one page than some do on 5 pages, loved it.

I'm into reading and writing stories that have real characters. Although we don't know alot about your characters, the relatively unusual use of first person female voice makes this real for me--in a most satisfying way. Thanks.

Loved the ending. Your comments about a man's cum on you were superb. Ruff.

OH Kitten!!! What a story!! Loved wvery word of it! You did an excellent job! Post more please!!

This is truly the best in first person erotica, you could tell the writer was completely into her words, and that's erotic in turn.

Very hot story. I would have loved to be a fly on the wall in the room where this happened. ;)

Nice erotic story, you can feel the emotion the hotness and the sexiness of the enclounter.