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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This would be one of the five hottest stories I've read here over the last 15 years. What more can I say.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story idea. You left plenty of loose ends. Will randy uncle get his comeuppance? Will Samantha make another appearance. I want some more.

QuantumseedQuantumseedover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for the comments so far. I have corrected some typos and made a few amendments for clarity. My writing style will not please everyone because I like to spend my time on details. There is scope for at least one more chapter if the comments are favourable.

Radical5Radical510 months ago

Encore! Encore!!! Please give us at least one more chapter.

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