All Comments on 'Lascivious Lisa Pt. 02 Ch. 01'

Still intrigued by structure and Lisa ( and now Alex), though this piece tries to do too much in same space as other pieces and parts are like a staccato — scenes feel detached from one another, which undermines any chance for erotic intensity/debauchery. Could have created 2-3 pieces out of content here. Liked it, but not as much.