All Comments on 'Last Chance Ch. 01'

I really liked this, loved the writing and the introduction of Cara. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I like it so far, but a little concerned about the foreshadowing in the beginning and what will happen to Cara. So great job getting me invested in the character.Looking forward to the next chapter

I love stories that have a little more plot to them. You are doing a great job. Hopefully you finish the series and don't leave your readers hanging too long!

So far this is my kinda story.... Can't wait for more. Please keep with it

I know I'm reading noncon, but this is too much like the real world. I'm reading while peaking through my fingers.

Thank you for your feedback! I hope to begin writing the next installment today, and I hope I've intrigued at least a few of you enough to come back for more. Things will be getting much more exciting when Cara comes back to consciousness! And I know someone commented on the realism aspect of the story, soon, things will be a little less believable, but hopefully not in a bad way. Thanks!

I hope she will be okay

I look forward to the next chapter.

You have given a good description of Cara, she sounds like she will be strong, I hope so. Good start, very realistic, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

I hope you update soon!

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!