by Masterless123
You have given a good description of Cara, she sounds like she will be strong, I hope so. Good start, very realistic, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
Thank you for your feedback! I hope to begin writing the next installment today, and I hope I've intrigued at least a few of you enough to come back for more. Things will be getting much more exciting when Cara comes back to consciousness! And I know someone commented on the realism aspect of the story, soon, things will be a little less believable, but hopefully not in a bad way. Thanks!
I know I'm reading noncon, but this is too much like the real world. I'm reading while peaking through my fingers.
So far this is my kinda story.... Can't wait for more. Please keep with it
I love stories that have a little more plot to them. You are doing a great job. Hopefully you finish the series and don't leave your readers hanging too long!
I like it so far, but a little concerned about the foreshadowing in the beginning and what will happen to Cara. So great job getting me invested in the character.Looking forward to the next chapter
I really liked this, loved the writing and the introduction of Cara. I am looking forward to the next chapter.