by RisingSun
We jump from the back seat of a Volve, to Jasons bed, that they've been in for two years, then you write she has to leave and she's gone, I just don't get it?
Very Nice story. Full of emotion and graphic detail. Sometimes the why isn't important, its only the the hurt that matters. The why can be whatever you want it to be.
I just wish i had more background...it is a beautiful piece of writing and i really enjoyed it...keep writing!
and when exactly do u plan on putting us out of our misery??? and wat is all that nonsense about wishing u'd never submitted this story? this is a beautiful story and i NEED more... fill in the blanks already or else i'll be back everday to leave a one star count. u've been warned!
when do you plan to finish this???? It is so good. I want them to have a HEA.
What the heck....that was sad. You have to write more to their story. They belong together. It not to often you find a man who's a good man, good in bed, & truly loves. you to boot. Plus his Asian. and likes black woman too. It gives hope to the rest of us sisters that like Asian men
. too.
Please write more of Jasmine and Rocky's story.