All Comments on 'Last Summer Camp Ch. 01'

A little sticky with his self doubt declarations, almost two dimensional, but those barely detracted from a beautiful story. You have a solid philosophy. I enjoyed the love as much as you do. 5 stars and lots of encouragement!

the issue became mute should read - the issue became moot

I will follow this

This is so excellently written. Touches all the right emotions.

I'm praying for a story from the sister's pov.

How she enjoyed this experience.

That was the only major shortfall of this fine fine piece.

Keep it going. Can't wait.

Very nice. Being raised as a nudist, I would have loved to go to a summer camp for nudist teens with my brother say ages 14-15.

Absolutely loved this story and look forward to more of it.

Minor typos; page 2, "Beth's husband Sam", incorrect. But enjoying the story so far!

Just a few glitches when it should have been Willow's name and not River but overall great story so far.

What a beautiful story. I loved it and I really hope you will continue with more chapters.

When will we see part 2?

Genuinely couldn't get past the opening few paragraphs.

I didn't come here to read about how nobody wants to work these days and how the liberals and hippies are the worst. This is how a middle aged conservative dude talks. I get that on the news every day. I don't need it in my porn.

Stupid, weird, unfun.

Doesn’t any body eat there at a camp just one mentioned breakfast no then else the whole story