All Comments on 'Last Train'

Why should I be beheaded 26thNC ?

So I could turn into a brainless moron like you ?

You should be beheaded for that one.

It was well written, but I didn’t find any entertainment in it at all.

--- but well written and entertaining. More.

I wouldn't worry about similar stories having been written before. After all, how many truly new plots are there? Fundamentally, all of literature can probably be summarized in a dozen or less plots. So, what matters is the style of the writing, the word choice, the tone, the pacing, and all those other things that distinguish good writing from crap.

And you telegraphed if by paragraph 6!

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