I like the story prenise very much. Overall it is technically good - although, I would better appreciate the topics to be combined with an ending teaser. Keep it up. I am looking forward to more.
The completed Spell Caster trilogy arc is complete and published on Literotica, Smashwords, and Amazon. And in case you were not aware, The Schooling of the Spell Caster won third place in the November 2022 Reader Awards under Sci-Fi/Fantasy. That was pretty cool. And it was ...