All Comments on 'Laundry Day'

What a great story! Thank you for posting this remarkably hot and fresh story here. It is so nice to see something this well written and proofed. I do hope that you tell us how laundry day continues from here. I see so many possibilities going forward.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Your story was enjoyable. I like your character of Allison as a dominant. She has a nice cool way about her with which I can identify. You also took your time setting up the eventual encounter. I hope you develop her further.

I hope there are more chapters to come.

Not often to read a "first edition" that is so well crafted. Thanks. Hope that there are more chapters cumming.....

Allison is a P.T. and you have described her well. Keep them cumming

Keep it up this was a great read. Would love for something like this to happen to me.