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Very nice first effort. Nice cliff hanger ending. Would like to see more from you.

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Ok Ed, I'm curious. Where is this tiny scene going? Could we not have words like 'quim'? It's really porny. If we're going to get nice girly sex, it would be good to have positive, sensitive description.

Really? 'Quim' -- which only appeared once in the story -- is an issue? What about that word is negative and insensitive?

A better argument would have been that it isn't correctly used, although I am sure that I've seen others use it to describe secretions. [How come guys get 'semen' and 'cum' -- or even 'jism' -- and women don't get a good one-word descriptor? ('Snail trail' anyone?)] That said, in retrospect, I probably should have used 'cum', to lend support for that word's asexual use.