All Comments on 'Laura Learns the Law'

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oldwayneoldwayneabout 16 years ago
Really Hot Tale!

One of the best little incest tales I have read...thanks for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

That was fantastically written :) I always fantasise about older men... I came so hard!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good job

You handle words well, and you have developed an old plot nicely!! Please, though, let me comment about grammar. You wrote, " was a major blow to my mother and I." Would you write, "was a major blow to I?" If not, why, for gracious sakes, would you say, "for my mother and I?" Please get a grammar book and look up the use of personal pronouns (I/me, he/him, etc.) used with proper nouns (mother and I/me; Jim and he/him).

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

i really wanted the grand father to cum on her aswell just like he'd fantasised about

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