All Comments on 'Laura Learns the Law'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

i really wanted the grand father to cum on her aswell just like he'd fantasised about

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good job

You handle words well, and you have developed an old plot nicely!! Please, though, let me comment about grammar. You wrote, " was a major blow to my mother and I." Would you write, "was a major blow to I?" If not, why, for gracious sakes, would you say, "for my mother and I?" Please get a grammar book and look up the use of personal pronouns (I/me, he/him, etc.) used with proper nouns (mother and I/me; Jim and he/him).

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

That was fantastically written :) I always fantasise about older men... I came so hard!

oldwayneoldwayneabout 16 years ago
Really Hot Tale!

One of the best little incest tales I have read...thanks for sharing it.

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