All Comments on 'Laura the Canvas Pt. 04'

Well all-righty then, Happily Ever After. I only wish you'd tossed in a quick line about what happens to any child. Breeding kink is fine, but I don't think this bunch would be much for the grind of parenthood. Then there is the idea of raising a kid in this world.

The human body isn't designed to squat for long periods of time and pressure on the knees will only destroy it faster and there is no repairing that.

Somehow, the idea of a tattooed, arthritic, incontinent, crippled middle aged woman is less than appealing.

excuse me!! but what cheap shit drugs were you under while you wrote these chapters?;) at least writer under classy n expensive drugs!! ;)

Some of the earlier dots were joined, but this part wasn’t as great as 1&2, or even part 3. Great idea, but maybe a bit hurried? But still written well.