All Comments on 'Lauren Ch. 02'

Your story is so much something that I desire. I wish I could find someone like Lauren. Thanks

The story is great, the portion with her ex coming back and being a man was a nice addition.

...I've ever seen on Literotica! You owe me for a whole box of tissues griffin, lol! <sigh> Its everything I needed at the very time I needed it most... Thank You for sharing your private fantasy with us, and I hope you will keep writing such stories for a very long time to come!!

Is this story going to continue? It would be so funny to read about them going out with him plugged and Lauren with the remote in her pocket switching it on and off randomly. LMAO,

I thought the first chapter of this story was one of the best--and the second chapter of this great love story only reinforced that opinion.

You retain your place at the top of my list--along with J, and you know who that is.

good way to end this portion of the story-hot sex too thanks

I'm happy that you are taking my advise.

I personally don't want to create an account but thank you for the advise.

I don't even know if you plan to publish any of your writings or your simply comfortable publishing your writings here, either way, never stop writing.

Who knows, maybe in the near future you will stumble onto my very first novel. :)

From the first letter of my name,

-A

Reading the passionate bonding, I could feel Lauren in me, too. A truly gifted writing and writer.

I really liked the way Rick had doubts and hesitated. Anything new is a challenge especially when it's "taboo". Your people were people. Good job

Really liked the addition of the dream scenarios, added a humorous counterpoint to grappling with his own sexuality

This story was beautifully written. I can actually imagine Lauren's face. The story was so hot and below fears mirror my own. With a woman like Lauren, all fears were quickly resolved. Glad the soldier turned out to not be so bad a guy. I am exhausted with stereotypes. I loved that she didn't have some monster 12 inch cock. This story seemed so realistic. Thank you

Have read several of your stories now, am really enjoying them. They help to give me hope that things may actually work out, when I finally get brave enough to start my transition. Not really sure there may be men out there brave or open enough to accept me in my more comfortable state, but I hope and wish that there are... Hugs, (Tanya)

Enjoying the story, think quickly got tired of reading the word "babe" what seemed like every sentence. But other then that it's good.

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Que Romantique!

11/10 Vibrating Buttplugs!!!!!