by arkark2009
great job. i like it when there's a bit more than the peeping in these stories. thanks.
Holland is neither a state nor a country sheesh. It is either one of two provinces. North Holland or South Holland. Both provinces are part of the country "The Netherlands"
It must have been crowded on the floor with both his jaw and this stomach there. Also poor grammar is a real turn off for me: "I slided my fingers in... and I lived up a fantasy of mine". Holland is the name of at least three cities in the U.S. cities: in Iowa, Michigan and New York . Just sayin'....