All Comments on 'Laurie and Shellie Ch. 01: Married Man'

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 8 years ago
Clever

I loved the sexy leg teasing done to the man with his wife. How long before Shellie realizes that Laurie gave her husband a blow job in his office and later fucked her husband in her own bed?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome

More, please. More humiliation, but put a face to the wife. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
can't wait for next part

This was great, please continue soon.

ZeruiahZeruiahover 8 years ago

Cuckcake... oh please. More.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
please write a second part

Super hot story. Please continue this series with more homewrecking

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Brilliant storry. Thank you very much

I love the open ending (as in how Shellie will react, when she finds out). It's a pity a paragraph from Laurie's POV reveals that she feels friendship towards Shellie. You might have left us wondering if she truly was Shellie's friend, or was just using her / toying with her.

Looking forward to more

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Please write more of this

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot as FUCK!

Wow, that was so naughty, wrong and oohhh so sexy. The writing was smooth and although the ending was foreshadowed, still very nicely done!

officemilfloverofficemilfloverabout 4 years ago
Naughty, fun, sexy, and well written!

HOTTEST

STORY

EVER!!!!

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