All Comments on 'Laying the Orc Ch. 02'

An excellent tale, full of politics and sex. Elise is a fascinating character, and it is a delight to see her blossom.

Plainly, the story is complete in itself, but there are myriad opportunities to advance the plot if you would like to continue (which is much to be hoped for). Among other ideas, perhaps the orcs virility treatment could permit Elise to have a child?

You write that Malrune’s clit has been trimmed (but plainly not to a degree to limit her orgasms). Is this some orcish ritual to enhance the fertility of older orcs by reducing the size of their clit (as it is implied that Malrune is bred despite her advanced age)? Given how avidly Elise has taken to orcish customs, she may choose to have her own clit trimmed in the hope that she could finally bear a child.

Please make a sequel! The concept is fantastic and super hot especially with the wife joining in. Some of the best new work I’ve read on the site.