All Comments on 'Lays of St Trinian's Ch. 02'

I really love Hoffy's gentle air of innocence and her occasional misunderstanding of the innuendo and double entendres. Readers could be forgiven for thinking this is a diary from you own schooldays, Pixie, rather than a humorous story. (?) So what's in store for the next foray into academia---regulation bras, perhaps?

I'm so glad that you are back.

I love your stories!

Love the characters and the feel of warm sexiness

This was another splendid chapter. The sexual innuendo and flirtiness are wonderful... and hilarious. The callback to the Emm from a few of your previous stories made me laugh out load ('I'm confused,' said Emm). And I am seeing other character names being borrowed from those stories as well, which is great. Oh, and I love how the "bossier" ladies like to call Pixie "Hoffy". :)

I am so glad you like it. Yes, getting Hoffy's tone is critical to the story. She has to be both a mildly critical observer of the general sluttery, but at the same time a participant!

I am glad you like it - it is encouraging xx

Awww, that makes me very happy. I was not sure that the humour would work alongside the eroticism, but am glad it is for you and others = xxx

With such nice comments, it makes me glad to be back xx

I don’t know what inspired you to write this story, but I think It’s hilarious and love it. More please Hoffy : )

So glad you like it - oh it was just my rather kinky imagination xxx