All Comments on 'Lazy Afternoon Ride'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
1rst Submission

Ok I read both your first submissions. And this one is just as good as "Library Loving". I would say you are on your way.

Congratulation

LolitaXXXLolitaXXXalmost 13 years ago
Nicely Done!

MMMMMM...Ride 'em cowboy!

Brett78xBrett78xalmost 12 years ago
Save a horse........

That was hot, fun, and funny. Raised around horses and horse lovers, I can relate to the perfectly described setting and circumstance. I was fortunate enough to know a few cowgirls in my youth. Damn but I'm still smiling after that read!

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15about 2 years ago

Excellent! Great build up. Terrific climax. Makes you root for them to get together.

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