All Comments on 'Lazy Sundays'

Your stories bring to mind the spinning spark wheel toy — even the same storyline yields dazzling sparks and whirling colors. Thanks for continuing to share your intimate thoughts and feelings.

Abuse is not always something we recognise at the time, but when it reaches the level you describe here, the only way is out xxxxx

3 *. Would have been 4 * if not for the dozens of grammar, spelling, punctuation errors. Could have been 5 * if more buildup and finding out about her abuser.

@JustplainJeff, I gave 5 stars. Not because the author didn't cross her i's or dot her t's, because I enjoyed her story. This place isn't high school, it is a place where people let their hair down and write what is on their minds in order to entertain us the readers. Some use this place as a form of catharsis, to "get off their chest" some of their own problems in the form of a fictional piece. Whatever the reason, maybe appreciating the effort and not the mechanics of an essay is something you could strive to learn. It is said, to fully appreciate a man or woman walk a mile in their shoes. Not stand in line to criticize.

well done. the story is important not so much the possible mistakes in the writing