All Comments on 'Lea and Jake Pt. 01'

Just weird, but well written

The story is okay, but you spend a long time getting anywhere. I read to the end because I really wanted to see if there was anything really interesting in it, but I'm not sure I would read another chapter. Perhaps finding someone to edit your work would make it more readable?

Need to know what happens next!!

I enjoyed this story. It has an interesting beginning. I am waiting for the next chapter, and the next, and the next.....