All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 02'

i love this story, can't wait till you write the next chapter

I LOVE THIS! And I'm so glad you are putting it out so fast I can barely wait for the next chapter!

I'm really excited to see where this goes! Can't wait to read more, hope you update soon!!

I'm so hooked. More please.

so good. I can't wait for more.

I'm looking forward to Cullen's next encounter with Aislinn!

This story was going so well. It had interesting characters with an intense plot. But now in chapter 2 the suspense is starting to unravel. Jenna is a classic villain. She's a bitch and she's evil. She's going to be a problem for them. So what else is new?

We did not need to know that...it spoiled the story for me. Sorry. I'm dissapointed. I was hooked until this chapter.

I'm very curious to learn more about our main characters. Is the girl really 100% human? She certainly has some special abilities, such as knowing instinctively who she can trust and who she cannot. She's not afraid of Cullen, or Lord Arnauk, and no wonder he was so surprised (in the first chapter) when she interrupted him while he was talking. I hope she remains unintimidated by him. Thanks for the quick update!

To top off all my other reasons of you pulling me in, Rissa is my nickname...kinda blew me away then. LoL!

Why do I have to be on my diet now of all times? I felt Aislinn's heart crush so hard that, even if she didn't need the comfort food, I certainly did. So out comes a big dollop spoonful of peanut butter. Heh, no ice cream in the house.

Sweet, tender, realistic.

Nice to know that snide bitchery crosses all lines...from human to lycan.....how refreshing.

Really, there is nothing better than a good bitch. Jenna does fit that bill nicely!

You should try and make this into a proper book and sell it on Amazon, y'know. A lot of people are doing it, and this is a book I'd definitely buy. Just a suggestion. =)

where is this all taking place? By the way i love this series. your writing is amazing.

Just reading these two chapters I already hate this Jenna bitch. Great writing, never have I read one of these stories a felt such emotions, I really really love your writing.

By the type of gaelic used in locations Im guessing Ireland since it doesnt look like manx or scots gael

LOL

This story is absolutely fantastic!!!

In chapter one they talk about how no one in the US bothers with Gaelic. So I would say somewhere in the US, as per that chapter. Pay attention to what your reading and you wont be asking questions that have been answered in previous chapters. I have read the whole series several times and you should have at least gotten the country right by now. After all, the discussion does cover several paragraphs. Continue reading and further questions of where will be clarified.

I can't get enough of were stories, the pull of the mates, especially when it complicates things! This one is especially good!

Jenna seems horrid! Cullen needs to back out of that arrangement ASAP

She's smart, capable, and it was refreashing to have her cut through his bull shit so quickly. he isnt the only one marring someone he doesnt care about, he doesnt have to be a dick about it. i realize she is being set up to be the villian of the story but it is nice to have a somewhat symphatic villian. its always better when you understand why someone behaves as they do.

If i was smart enough to be an alpha but denied my birth right because my father assumed i was to weak id be just as frustrated too.

i just hope i dont change my mind about her as the story continues.

Did you just call Jenna "sympathetic" after she was plotting to "remove" Cullen so she could get what she wants?

Sympathetic would be if she actually cared about people which she seems to not. She has no care for anyone but her (ex. glares at the waitress for no reason) and is power hungry (ex. planing to remove Cullen).

While it may not be her fault, she has been coddled and views herself as superior in every way with little self reflection. Further, just because someone was coddled doesn't mean they will turn out this way.

Love it! xxx

Hey, I was just wondering are you using Irish Gaelic or Scottich Gealic?

I'm glad that you warned that this is a first draft.

The story's great, and the minor word usage mistakes are a lot easier to take with prior warning.

I hope you've included a translation of "caoch" in your for-sale version, as all I could find was "sleeve", which doesn't match the context.

She thinks the leader who developed the strongest pack will be easy to influence? hmmm