All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 07'

Such a wonderful story! I've read all of it so far and am waiting for the next one with expectations of it blossoming from a bud to a beautiful flower.

Secretme - this was a great update. I loved all the back info on Aislinn, learning more about what happened with her and Rafe. Wow, she's been on the run for 7 years? I also really liked hearing both Aislinn's and Cullen's thoughts. They are both unsure how the other really feels. But if I'm not mistaken, didn't Cullen just mate with her in the shower? <br><br>

Now I want to see how Aislinn deals with the females of the pack who will be jealous and want to chase her off. Wait til they see Cullen's mark on her neck/shoulder! I love this series, and I would be interested in having access to the entire story once it is complete, with any changes you've made to it.

Of course I would be interested in reading a re-edited version of this story. I love your story and the characters shine with individuality. I think you're doing a smashing job and can't wait to read more! --ny

Wow, I can not believe how much I love this story. I love the progression of the plot and characters. Can't wait to read more.

As above, i also would gladly reread a edited version, but first i would like to see the end of the story. Keep up the good work!

Ann Rice is that you? lol

I CAN NOT! wait to find out what she shifts into! I REALLY hope she kicks some butt! Your story is awesome! LOVE IT

you kiddin? I always re-read stories, and hunt down the authors stories when they are removed from the page.

You should draw this out and publish it. Your story so far is as well if not better written than alot of the books on the market. Good work and Good luck

the story line is coming together really well. I like long chapters! except for basic spelling and grammar errors, this installment is great. Not rushed, nicely paced.

You're doing an amazing job of actually telling a story here. You don't give everything away at the beginning, and your character development and story lines are incredibly well thought out. I'd totally re-read an edited version of this, and I'd buy a published version!

its the perfect story im craving and its 12 43 am with school tomarow grrr i will be back tomarow to finish the rest of the story damn i loved the story soo much i cant wait till i get to the next chaper damn time ...

Don't change a thing. The reflection of innocence between author and character is endearing. I can imagine you as Aislinn and me as Cullen. That is a special interaction between author and reader. If you screw with your writing style, you'll lose the special interaction.

It's been a wonderful read since Chapter 1. You're a great storyteller! Can't wait to get through the other chapters!

Your story line is amazing and captavating. Dont worry much about typo's everyone makes them. Please keep writing as i can't seem to stop reading!

Have you created a book yet? Submitted to an erotic books publisher yet? This is great something like this could be for sale by elloras cave, bookstrand, fictionwise?? Great

that shower scene: wow. that's all.

I am really enjoying your story. I am constantly looking forward to reading each chapter, witch is something I rarely get to say, compared to some of the other poorly written crap I've read.Keep up the good work.

I want a Cullen TT^TT

Informative and passionate.

totaly awsome

wow...wow...wow wow!!!!!!!

yayyyy !!!!! n WOWWWWWW!!!!!!!

xoxo

Aria

I'm confused. First, Cullen doesn't recognize that Aislinn is his mate. Second, he puts The Pack's welfare before said MATE (Aislinn). Next, he made sure they evacuated not knowing the whereabouts and safety of Aislinn. Third, and the biggest muddle is when Cullen mates with her without telling her the full ramifications of the bite. WTF??? Confuzzled!

Sigh....on to the next chapter.....

Anonymous retardled confuzzled.....as alpha it is his duty to protect his pack. At all costs. Plus the bite may or may not infect her. Its not a law of physics u braindead moron. It is upto the author to decide the correct mating process....

The only thing I'm disappointed about is the name Cullen. I mean, all i can think of because of that is sparkly vampires. Ugh

Pretty sure this pre-dates sparkly vampires.

I laughed so hard... :D Brilliant!

I've got to ask though: a bear and a gorilla? 0.o

Good chapter, can't wait to read it to the end!!! :D

You made it sound like she was in her mid 20's but then you have her working on her master's degree 7 years ago. But before she said she was a college drop out. Huh? ----- Otherwise, great chapter!