All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 11'

But not much getting resolved. I was thinking we'd hear a bit more about what Brinah knows. Why did she say the pack will die if they stay there? Did she ever explain in detail what she meant by that? I was also surprised that Cullen didn't seem worried about Aislinn for the rest of the afternoon and into the evening. What happened to Aislinn's danger-sensing ability? I'm kind of surprised that knowing that Rafe is after Aislinn, and the lengths he will go do, that Cullen didn't assign a body guard to her.<br><br>

This chapter was great! Cullen is going to go mad if he cant find her! silly men and trying deny there feelings! lol Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

ALSO loved this chapter I REALLY hope Ais will be ok!! And man poor Rainald!

Just teasing Secret - you are always so consistent with regular updates and I really appreciate it. <br><br>

Okay, normally I would think Brinah was being over the top, questing Cullen on his intentions and putting herself into her granddaughter's business. But since neither Aislinn or Cullen have actually gotten the guts to speak up, I think it's funny Brinah is the one pushing the issue. I will say that Cullen needs to live up to his alpha status and go for what he wants.<br><br>

I'm not sure why Rafe should be so powerful, if he began as a druid like the others. What I'm hoping is that the greater strength Aislinn has begun experiencing is not apparent only when she is around Cullen. I think she's growing into her own, and can be more powerful than Rafe, which is why he's so determined to get her under his thumb before she realizes that. Maybe Aislinn and Jenna can be unlikely allies? <br><br>

Thanks for the update!

I didn't see that Chapter 14 was posted later on in the list. Aaagh! Now I'll have to fight my desire to read ahead!

ich frage mich auch wo denn nun 12 + 13 sind, und vor allem wo bitte ist denn nun chapter 14 hin ?????

ansonsten finde ich die geschichte wirklich super gut und freue mich wenn es endlich weiter geht

Okay guys, You'll have to forgive that I just kinda voted on my own stuff cuz I didn't know how else to get the word out to everyone who's e-mailing and feedbacking.

*which I love by the way ;0 *

But I don't know why Lit posted em out of order. They have up to chapter 16. I'm not sure if there's anything I can do about them being out of order. I am sorry. Pass the word. I love feedback but I got about a million "just letting you know" e-mails.

And I hope you guys are in for the long haul cuz it's not done yet... I do tend to get long winded....

This is one of the better stories I have read, paid or otherwise. You are an excellent writer!

He's alpha. He's supposed to know what to do.

My. Heart. Just cracked.

.. he just completely messed the whole thing up, belittling his woman's intuition and instincts. what a little shit. I can see why Celia doesn't give him the time of day :) She's actually completely on point with that! :)

..Mack also stopped the momentum of the chase, at the worst moment!.... Celia should trust her instincts of just shaking him off.... the one time she doesn't, everything goes to hell LOL :)..... aww, feeling it for Celia now.... she has no viable option apart from Cullen....

love the story i see Rafe getting Aislinn but when he fully turns her if he does not mate her first i feel that he is in a world of hurt

Some of your chapter descriptions, like the present one, are major spoilers and decrease the pleasure of the read. Not that I’m stopping.