All Comments on 'Leading the Blind'

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dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

Love to read more of the AUthor's text... in Comments, Please..!!

alexwatson62alexwatson62about 1 year ago

I liked this, but I`m damned if I can fully work out why!!

It was strange from start to finish.

It started with a huge omission, which was technically a cruel lie.

It continued with an instant forgiveness followed by yet another huge omission.

Its a story that should never work, yet strangely it actually does!!

Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Stellar work, thank you.

redlion75redlion75about 1 year ago

Love me for me from both of them.

GhostHunter55GhostHunter55about 1 year ago

Will you resume this story? I enjoyed it very much and it would disappointing if you Ryder and Elise's blooming romance here.

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