by MegaTank
I liked this, but I`m damned if I can fully work out why!!
It was strange from start to finish.
It started with a huge omission, which was technically a cruel lie.
It continued with an instant forgiveness followed by yet another huge omission.
Its a story that should never work, yet strangely it actually does!!
Nicely done.
Will you resume this story? I enjoyed it very much and it would disappointing if you Ryder and Elise's blooming romance here.