All Comments on 'League of Secrets'

Thanks for sharing.

Two less animals...I know, I know, it's an insult to animals compare these two beasts to an animal. Pity one shot was lost...They deserved all bullets in them...

Good shooting, if your wife / family is in danger ones act accordingly.

Nice shooting

There should be a lot more of this type of 'vermin eradication' in a lot of other stories on Lit's LW category lately. Keep writing.

I don't know why there are such negative comments. A guy walked into a rape situation of his wife by 2 armed punks. He didn't beat off, take photos or have a wimpy dialogue. As he was not a trained killer many thoughts ran through his mind including doing it right.. He took care of business as a loving husband to his loving wife. Of course this story belongs here

Anonymous posters, go fuck yourselves. Either be 'brave' enough to use a name or stop dribbling over the keys.

The story wasn't bad. I can't call it good either, but it is a story. I would like to point out how rapidly a human mind works. A nanosecond is a long time to snapping neurons. So the side thoughts took less than an instant to occur, be processed, and set aside in a stress situation.

First (and to be repeated) I liked the tale!

Second, this is miscategorized. There is NO adventurous woman here - there IS Sweetie ... a female rape victim. (As soon as she was coerced to touch Blond Bandido's Boner, it was rape!). Not really sure WHAT category (among LIT's options) this WOULD fall under ... Reluct/NonConsent sounds closest.

Hubby admits to not being very practiced with his firearm. This is then confirmed by letting himself get sidetracked by trivial aspects, such as shlong analysis and consequent speculations about Sweetie's experiences.). He then engages in a fundamental firearm error ... taking a head-shot. This, despite being fairly safe at close range with a stationary target! Then snapping off a hasty (missed) shot against the second perp!

Why the fuck is the Italian Stallion portrayed as having a rare (except in LIT) Colossal Cock? It wastes* precious time (Sweertie nerve's time AND We-The-Readers' time) and contributes precious little (pun not intended) to the moral of the tale!

* omitting Ponderous Pietro means perp has no need to move out of Hubby's original sight-picture, etc.

Despite these quibbles, I still like this account!

4*

A nanosecond is about the time that light takes to travel TWO feet! Neurotransmission works more in the millisecond range (a million -or more- times slower!). Still damn fast!

- don't try this at home, kids! And if you do, don't empty your clip if you can help it. First, find out if there were any other intruders. A third man, upstairs, collecting loot, could come downstairs with HIS Glock. With yours empty, well - it's not good.

Unless an expert marksman in the military, head shots are for SWAT teams!

Next, it's a magazine, not a clip!

Staging the scene afterwards is an invitation for a prosecuter in CA, MA, NY, NJ, CN, MN, etc., to crucify you! You were in fear for your life and your wife's! There were at least two of them, younger, and obviously armed and dangerous felons! (Breaking into the dwelling of another in the nighttime with intent to commit a felony, has been for the last thousand or so years in Anglo-American jurisiprudence the crime of "Burglary", traditionally punished by death!)

Stop the threat! Is what hubby needs to do! Also, as one oerson pointed out, emptying the magazine before geing certain there are no other perps around is not the wisest idea! Should have had another loaded magazine with the Glock in the drawer. And stuck it in yiur waist band.

Five stars!

Wouldn't have done anything different, except use a Sig .40. Wonder how the guys got in? Doesn't really matter, they were carried out. If she had a thing going on, she'll think twice about doing it again. Other guys will too.

Lucky I'm more than adequately trained for this type of scenario because this story would've been tremendously shorter ... like at the sixth paragraph.

Two to the chest & one to the head with both dead on the floor.