All Comments on 'Leah's Predicament'

by ClayAdams

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jleetechiejleetechieabout 4 years ago
Yes we are hard up for stories

But this is dumb, dumb, dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Ridiculous

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great start

Keep up the story line. I see a lot of potential on many scenarios in coming chapters. So many ways for this alternate detention to evolve. How long is Leah going to be in?

SmCyberSmCyberabout 4 years ago
Well done great introduction

Really enjoyed your introduction.

I agree there are many ways this story can develop.

I hope some of the other characters you introduce will be detained in more non comsentual roles.

I can never understand why people post negative posts simply because the story isn't in line with their personal fantasy. CRAZY!

Keep up the good work... don't rush in and exhaust the story line... develop the humiliations and the venue. Leave story lines open Etc.

Thanks SmCyber

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice.

I don't understand the negative comments on this story. It was a great start and I hope to read more chapters in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Can this get extended? This is a great story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue the story!!!

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Hello, I go by Clay on here. I’m a college student and in my free time I dabble in writing erotic literature. My primary interests are extreme bondage, body modification, and slavery. If you have any feedback on my stories or just want to chat please don’t hesitate to reach out.