by ClayAdams
Keep up the story line. I see a lot of potential on many scenarios in coming chapters. So many ways for this alternate detention to evolve. How long is Leah going to be in?
Really enjoyed your introduction.
I agree there are many ways this story can develop.
I hope some of the other characters you introduce will be detained in more non comsentual roles.
I can never understand why people post negative posts simply because the story isn't in line with their personal fantasy. CRAZY!
Keep up the good work... don't rush in and exhaust the story line... develop the humiliations and the venue. Leave story lines open Etc.
Thanks SmCyber
I don't understand the negative comments on this story. It was a great start and I hope to read more chapters in the future.