by tammys_greg
This a great story. I wish it could happen to me. Wow.
I want to experience that feeling, being bent over and being used by her.
Writing is very good...some usage problems but overall quite sound. Story is excellent, both likable (human and smart) and hot (a hard mix). The comment about length I agree with but primarily because one wants more of a good thing. Eagerly awaiting next installment.
I like the story but you could work on the legnth of the chapters a bit. Excellent otherwise.