All Comments on 'Learning to Dance'

Please do an epilogue of their time thru the pregnancy !

LOVED IT. NOW ,ABOUT THAT OTHER STORY................JUST DO NOT MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG FOR IT. LOL. . MOTHER AND DAUGHTER PREGNANT AT THE SAME TIME, BY THE SAME LOVER, THIS SHOULD MAKE AN INTERESTING CONTINUATION, GOOD LUCK

Desperately in need of an editor. The many vocabulary and spelling errors spoil the story.

An awesome premise, but for the love of god get an editor…your spelling and grammar are atrocious!

So many typos, proof read or get an editor!

hard to read with so many grammatical errors. it is like a 12 year old in spelling and punctuation..... please get an editor for your next story.

Is English your second language?

I gave up reading as the spelling is so bad and the grammar is no better.

If you are going to keep writing GET A PROOF READER!

If you write further stories, please get someone to edit your spelling and grammar.

More please, love this sexy story. I am able to read through the little errors as most others should too. Please write a sequel to this lovely story. Ignore the grammar nazis who never seem to enjoy a story for what it is.

The story premise is great.

Unfortunately, the delivery lets it down,

It pays to have someone else run an eye over one's work before releasing it into the wild.

I loved this! I get a little annoyed the cocks always so large. Especially when I can please with my 5n ahalf. Good ending. Barbara reminded me of my mom.

I could't get through the first page. The grammar, syntax, and punctuation errors were too distracting for me. i like the premise; clean it up and repost please.