by luv2custrip
Very nice ... and very erotic. Chapter by chapter, Lori keeps on getting more and more attractive, interesting, and sexy. Inge was fun too, and I enjoyed the new, slightly crude, not entirely admirable narrator for this chapter, Rich. 5*
Another fine chapter in the series. Sounds like Lori has another admirer that could make it difficult for Dennis. I was there watching as they made love. I could see what a spectacular woman she is. Not even Inga could surpass her. The fact that after two months Lori committed to being Red with him, could be interesting in the next chapter.
It is a pity that the writer did not keep up with the level of tension and excitement of the first chapter. Worse, in this chapter she changes viewpoint. All of a sudden we are supposed to see it through a man's eyes.
Chapter 1 is a 5, chapter 2 a 4 and chapter 3 a 2 but this is a 1. Boring boring and confusing.